Saturday, 22 October 2016

Linking the Writing Process to the Writing Traits

Linking the Writing Process to the Writing Traits

Food for thought

Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing – Benjamin Franklin
The true alchemists do not change lead into gold, they change the world into words – William H. Gass

Now that you have digested those edible thoughts, let us take a look at what was done in the previous LIT 102 class which was held on the 27th September 2016. Pixies’ Dust

The inter-relatedness of the writing process (prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing)and the 6+1 writing traits ideas, organization, voice, sentence fluency, word choice, convention, presentation) was studied.

The first quality of the 6+1 writing traits ‘ideas’, are a combination of prewriting, drafting and revising. Ideas are the content of a piece. Ideas further include the main message in the story, as well as the supporting details. The second trait ‘organizing’, is a combination of the drafting and revising stage. Organization is the structure of the writing piece; the sequence in which the essay is presented. Revising and editing can be found in the trait which promotes the use of colourful, vibrant and precise language that clearly expresses feelings, moods, likes and dislikes readers are able to picture mentally. This trait is known as ‘word choice’. Editing also corresponds to ‘sentence fluency’, ‘voice’ and ‘convention’. Sentence fluency refers how the sentences which make up the piece flow when read aloud. Voice is a sense of the writer’s personality within the piece. Voice within writing demonstrates the writer’s passion, feelings, individuality and enthusiasm that produces a bond between the reader and the writer. Convention includes spellings, grammar usage, punctuation, capitalization and paragraphing. It is the editing process of the piece.
The +1 trait is that of presentation. How inviting is the writing to readers despite well-developed sentences and ideas; despite proper grammar, appropriate spelling, punctuation, capitalization and paragraphing is defined as presentations. Presentation is quite similar to publishing.
In addition to the interrelatedness of the writing process and the 6+1 writing traits, we looked at the information sentences provide us with. This include tenses (past, present, future), the type (declarative, interrogative, imperative) and the structure (simple, compound, complex)


Below are some examples of sentences with the different tenses, structures and types.

Tenses

Sentence in the past tense – Yesterday was a beautiful day to go horseback riding.

Sentence in the present tense – Today is a beautiful day for horseback riding. 


Sentence in the future tense – Tomorrow will be a beautiful day for horseback riding.

Structure

Simple sentence – Jesse kicked the ball.            

Compound sentence – Jesse kicked the ball and broke Mrs Benn’s bedroom window.
            
Complex sentence – Mrs Benn was very upset because the ball Jesse kicked broke her bedroom window.

Types

Declarative sentence – Anya is a really good hairdresser.  


Interrogative – Do you know Anya, the hairdresser?

Imperative – Meet me at Anya’s Beauty Salon for 10:30 a.m.

25 comments:

  1. When edifying quotes like the above are read and digested, they really do make me want to:
    1. Write something worth reading and
    2. Write something which will result in change, change to get our students of today to develop the zeal for reading and writing.

    Pixie Thel

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  2. When edifying quotes like the above are read and digested, they really do make me want to:
    1. Write something worth reading and
    2. Write something which will result in change, change to get our students of today to develop the zeal for reading and writing.

    Pixie Thel

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  4. Extremely interesting and informative piece. The manner in which it was explained and the examples simplified the relevant information. I really hope that when I return to the classroom I can get my students especially the grade three students into integrating various types of sentences into their writing pieces to make them more interesting.............Shameika Paul

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  5. This blog post is very informative. I intend to use some of this useful information in my classroom. Keep up the good work guys.

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  6. This blog post is very informative. I intend to use some of this useful information in my classroom. Keep up the good work guys.

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  7. Good job guys. I like the way that you highlighted the interrelatedness of the writing process and the traits of writing. I hope to use some of the information provided to enhance my lessons in the future.

    Gizelle Edward

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  8. Good job guys. I like the way that you highlighted the interrelatedness of the writing process and the traits of writing. I hope to use some of the information provided to enhance my lessons in the future.

    Gizelle Edward

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  9. Great job Pixies. This information is very informative and I can make great use of it when I return to the classroom.

    Ciara Joseph

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  10. Very informative Pixies, I love the use of the examples.

    Keyanie Desir- Cools

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  12. GREAT POST. LOOKING FORWARD TO SOME MORE INTERESTING UPDATES FROM YOU THREE. KEEP IS UP. BESOS.

    SHADITTA

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  13. Good job guys I really like this post as I find it to be very informative and I am looking forward to using some of these examples as well as information in my future classroom.

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  14. I Love,Love this piece. Great job
    Janelle

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  15. This post is excellent, I really love the use of the various types of sentences. They were clear and simple to understand. As a teacher, I am looking forward to using some of the ideas from this piece posted by you guys. I believe that everyone should make use of those ideas with the students.

    Bertha Alexander

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  16. I am getting some very useful tips from this blog. The pictures with the sentences if really nice.
    Marla

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  17. Great job Chrisher and your group members. Your pictures caught my attention. This was a very good way to get the message across.

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  18. I found the presentation could not of went by unmentioned, it was nicely put together. good job guys!

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  19. The 6+1 traits of writing is very informative. It has essentially taught the components of writing that we need to know

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  20. Microteaching gave me a glimpse of the things to come so attention as much as i can and learnt alot. Great job guys

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  21. we all did great job at the micro teaching but my point of view is that we need to engage the students more in the process rather than telling or explaining the process. I know the challenge is how to go about doing that but that's why we are professionals. to come up with creative ways to deliver content.

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  22. This quote has certainly inspired me, this tells me that writing is not just a skill which is grasp over night but rather it is a process. Writing requires great thought. One must think about their intended audience ( write something worth reading about), the topic or ideas in one's piece must be meaningful, also one must use vocabulary which facilitate communication. This again highlights the writing process. When we follow the writing process it makes it more likely that we will write something worth reading. I look forward to teaching my students how they can use the writing process to write narrative, expositions, descriptive pieces, persuasive and poems that are worth reading about.

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