Food for thought
Either write something
worth reading or do something worth writing – Benjamin Franklin
The true alchemists do
not change lead into gold, they change the world into words – William H. Gass
Now that you have
digested those edible thoughts, let us take a look at what was done in the
previous LIT 102 class which was held on the 27th September 2016.
Pixies’ Dust
The inter-relatedness of
the writing process (prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing)and
the 6+1 writing traits ideas, organization, voice, sentence fluency, word
choice, convention, presentation) was studied.
The
first quality of the 6+1 writing traits ‘ideas’, are a combination of
prewriting, drafting and revising. Ideas are the content of a piece. Ideas
further include the main message in the story, as well as the supporting
details. The second trait ‘organizing’, is a combination of the drafting and
revising stage. Organization is the structure of the writing piece; the
sequence in which the essay is presented. Revising and editing can be found in the
trait which promotes the use of colourful, vibrant and precise language that
clearly expresses feelings, moods, likes and dislikes readers are able to
picture mentally. This trait is known as ‘word choice’. Editing also
corresponds to ‘sentence fluency’, ‘voice’ and ‘convention’. Sentence fluency
refers how the sentences which make up the piece flow when read aloud. Voice is
a sense of the writer’s personality within the piece. Voice within writing
demonstrates the writer’s passion, feelings, individuality and enthusiasm that
produces a bond between the reader and the writer. Convention includes
spellings, grammar usage, punctuation, capitalization and paragraphing. It is
the editing process of the piece.
The
+1 trait is that of presentation. How inviting is the writing to readers
despite well-developed sentences and ideas; despite proper grammar, appropriate
spelling, punctuation, capitalization and paragraphing is defined as
presentations. Presentation is quite similar to publishing.
In
addition to the interrelatedness of the writing process and the 6+1 writing traits,
we looked at the information sentences provide us with. This include tenses
(past, present, future), the type (declarative, interrogative, imperative) and
the structure (simple, compound, complex)
Below are some examples
of sentences with the different tenses, structures and types.
Tenses
Sentence in the present
tense – Today is a beautiful day for horseback riding.
Sentence in the future tense – Tomorrow will be
a beautiful day for horseback riding.
Structure
Simple sentence – Jesse
kicked the ball.
Compound sentence – Jesse
kicked the ball and broke Mrs Benn’s bedroom window.
Types
Declarative sentence – Anya is a really good
hairdresser.
Interrogative – Do you
know Anya, the hairdresser?
Imperative – Meet me at
Anya’s Beauty Salon for 10:30 a.m.




When edifying quotes like the above are read and digested, they really do make me want to:
ReplyDelete1. Write something worth reading and
2. Write something which will result in change, change to get our students of today to develop the zeal for reading and writing.
Pixie Thel
When edifying quotes like the above are read and digested, they really do make me want to:
ReplyDelete1. Write something worth reading and
2. Write something which will result in change, change to get our students of today to develop the zeal for reading and writing.
Pixie Thel
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteExtremely interesting and informative piece. The manner in which it was explained and the examples simplified the relevant information. I really hope that when I return to the classroom I can get my students especially the grade three students into integrating various types of sentences into their writing pieces to make them more interesting.............Shameika Paul
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is very informative. I intend to use some of this useful information in my classroom. Keep up the good work guys.
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is very informative. I intend to use some of this useful information in my classroom. Keep up the good work guys.
ReplyDeleteGood job guys. I like the way that you highlighted the interrelatedness of the writing process and the traits of writing. I hope to use some of the information provided to enhance my lessons in the future.
ReplyDeleteGizelle Edward
Good job guys. I like the way that you highlighted the interrelatedness of the writing process and the traits of writing. I hope to use some of the information provided to enhance my lessons in the future.
ReplyDeleteGizelle Edward
Great job Pixies. This information is very informative and I can make great use of it when I return to the classroom.
ReplyDeleteCiara Joseph
Very informative Pixies, I love the use of the examples.
ReplyDeleteKeyanie Desir- Cools
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteGREAT POST. LOOKING FORWARD TO SOME MORE INTERESTING UPDATES FROM YOU THREE. KEEP IS UP. BESOS.
ReplyDeleteSHADITTA
Good job guys I really like this post as I find it to be very informative and I am looking forward to using some of these examples as well as information in my future classroom.
ReplyDeleteI Love,Love this piece. Great job
ReplyDeleteJanelle
This is an excellent post.
ReplyDeleteThis post is excellent, I really love the use of the various types of sentences. They were clear and simple to understand. As a teacher, I am looking forward to using some of the ideas from this piece posted by you guys. I believe that everyone should make use of those ideas with the students.
ReplyDeleteBertha Alexander
I am getting some very useful tips from this blog. The pictures with the sentences if really nice.
ReplyDeleteMarla
Great job Chrisher and your group members. Your pictures caught my attention. This was a very good way to get the message across.
ReplyDeleteI found the presentation could not of went by unmentioned, it was nicely put together. good job guys!
ReplyDeleteThe 6+1 traits of writing is very informative. It has essentially taught the components of writing that we need to know
ReplyDeleteMicroteaching gave me a glimpse of the things to come so attention as much as i can and learnt alot. Great job guys
ReplyDelete(Jervaughn M Charles )
Deletewe all did great job at the micro teaching but my point of view is that we need to engage the students more in the process rather than telling or explaining the process. I know the challenge is how to go about doing that but that's why we are professionals. to come up with creative ways to deliver content.
ReplyDeleteKevin Mathurin
ReplyDeleteThis quote has certainly inspired me, this tells me that writing is not just a skill which is grasp over night but rather it is a process. Writing requires great thought. One must think about their intended audience ( write something worth reading about), the topic or ideas in one's piece must be meaningful, also one must use vocabulary which facilitate communication. This again highlights the writing process. When we follow the writing process it makes it more likely that we will write something worth reading. I look forward to teaching my students how they can use the writing process to write narrative, expositions, descriptive pieces, persuasive and poems that are worth reading about.
ReplyDelete